Wednesday, April 26, 2006

Sinus infection- day 2

Go me, I skipped another day of school. Maybe having a sinus infection isn't so bad.

So I found one of my old stories yesterday, and I started reading it. It was the one based in midieval times, with knights and kings and all that. Then I sent it to Jessica, and apparently it "inspired" her to write her own. So she started one, similar to it. Then I started a new one. I really like how this one is turning out though, I think it is a lot more mature. Granted, its about two girls that disguise themselves as men to go to war to save their twin brothers. Mulan-ish, but not really. Because once they get found out, they are send to the kingdom they are at war with, to assassinate their king. It's going to be awesome. I'm debating on whether or not I want to put it onto Fiction Press or not.

Here's part from the first chapter-

“You even said it yourself, Avelina, I am more of a boy than our baby brothers.” Juliana replied softly, looking away from her sister.

“You know that is not what I meant--”

“Do not speak to me as though I am some senseless idiot, Avelina Ela. I choose to fight in the place of my brothers, in the place that my father once was, and I will do so, no matter what you say.” Juliana stood up, after giving Avelina one last heated gaze, and turned to leave.

“Wait--”

“I have nothing more to say to you Avelina--” Juliana said, not bothering to turn around.

“I will go with you.” Juliana’s feet came to an abrupt halt, and she turned around slowly to face her sister.

“What…?” Her voice came out raspy from the cold.

“I will go with you, Juliana Clare.” Avelina did not move from her spot on the grass but looked up, her eyes glazed over with unshed tears. “We shall go together.”

So like I said I really like how it's turning out :)

Well I'm going to take a nappy.

Ciao

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